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Kira
Jun 20, 2007 22:28:16 GMT -5
Post by amanda on Jun 20, 2007 22:28:16 GMT -5
Name: Kira
Gender: Mare
Herd: Gem herd
Age: 6
Parents: Wild/unknown
Foals: Has one day old colt named maze
Mate: used to, but not anymore
Picture: none
Type: pegasus
Description: Faith is a paint black and white mare with a white mane and tail. She has a small scar on her hindquarters from a fight with a cougar. She is about 14 hands (in height). The gem on her forehead is a deep blue saphire.
Personality: Faith is generally nice and she trusts easily. If she is betrayed in someway, it is hard to win her trust back. She is protective of her colt, as a mother horse would be. She can be stubborn at times. ----------------------------------------------- Name: Maze
Gender: colt
Herd: Gem herd
Age: 1 day old
Parents: Kira
Foals: none
Mate: none
Picture: none
Type: pegasus
Description: Maze is black with a white mane and tail. The gem on maze's forehead is a green emerald.
Personality: Maze is curious and always has to investigate anything new that he sees. He can be stubborn, which comes from his mother. He doesn't trust as easily as his mother does, unless he has known them for a while (so basically he only trusts his mother seeing as he is only about a day old)
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Kira
Jun 21, 2007 6:16:21 GMT -5
Post by Serenity on Jun 21, 2007 6:16:21 GMT -5
Pretty good bio, but you just have a few corrections to make. The name Faith is already in use, and she's a paint in GemHerd too. In GemHerd, all horses have a colored gem on their forhead, so you'll need to add a gem for the mare and her colt. Other than that, you just need get a new name for the mare, and a biography for Maze. Then this can be accepted. Thanks!
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Kira
Jun 21, 2007 13:57:14 GMT -5
Post by amanda on Jun 21, 2007 13:57:14 GMT -5
mkay, i modified it. I changed the name to kira and added a bio for maze ^_^
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Kira
Jun 22, 2007 6:46:28 GMT -5
Post by Serenity on Jun 22, 2007 6:46:28 GMT -5
Much better. ^^ But the bio for Maze is seperate from Kira's. Like you have Kira's all finished, but don't include Maze in the description. Make a completely new bio for him, and you'll be all set, and this will be accepted.
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Kira
Jun 22, 2007 11:25:20 GMT -5
Post by amanda on Jun 22, 2007 11:25:20 GMT -5
aye, i got it now i think ^_^
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Kira
Jun 22, 2007 14:12:33 GMT -5
Post by Serenity on Jun 22, 2007 14:12:33 GMT -5
Yep, thanks! This is now accepted, and the characters may be Role played in the appropriate herd.
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